Whats wrong with this flyer..hard rejected?

Hi Guys,

Couldn’t understand whats GR upto? i need some feedback whts wrong with this flyer?

Regards
Brij

hi Brij, i really like what u have done here , this is harmonious, colorful and original, plus i like the way u played with the main titles typo … :slight_smile: however , i think that u may improve the flyer slightly with changing the color of the first top line and making it have more contrast and readability … i would also rework the footer, personally since this introducing sort of an issue hierarchy wise … i believe u should cut the “linear” aspect by inserting a bullet under dj names , for instance …

Thnx bro… . Appreciate!

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