What's wrong with it?

Thought for sure… :

(https://www.dropbox.com/s/igqqiovi0redhfy/Smile.wav?dl=0

The instruments sound dated and the mix down also is a bit rough (EQ is needed in places).

Thanks

This needs a loooottt of work to be acceptred. You must gain more experience

I already got one accepted. Can you be more specific? Mixing? Arrangement? What?