What's wrong in this logo reveal?

Please :smiley: review it n tell me what did i miss…

@Creattive Sorry for tagging but can you tell me what’s wrong bro?

I don’t think it is designed very well. It just doesn’t look good. The shadow is just a blurry copy of the logo looking more like a cheap glow. The swipe is overblown, the reveal does not fit to the rest of the animation.

All in all it just looks like pieced together effects, nothing works together visually.

Many people think minimal logo reveals are super easy to do. The thing is, when there are very few elements and the animation is not super complex, whatever is there needs to be executed extremely well.

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Thank you for your honest review brother.

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