What you think about this 3D titles?

Created 4 3D titles, What you think?

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All of them are bit raw. You need to work more on textures, shades and light. Also this type of presentation doesn’t help on selling potential. Create some examples using the titles.

you got a good point about examples thnx.

hi buddy for me the last are great , a better lighting maybe welcome for the last one but i really like these , for the first two ones, i think that they are a bit plain and lacking contrast or volume

thnx, i be working on it, specialy the lighting.

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u should put it the the same context , i see that this is clearer but in this context it looks more “artificial” i am wandering if this is coming from the background here …

They are all rejected, strange but the happy holiday title in a flyer is approved.