What wrong with my work??

Hi everyone. My name is Oleg, I’m a new author on graphicriver. I make logos. Please tell me why my logo was hard rejected. I need your help to aprove it. Thanks

I think you need to improve the color scheme and typography.

Personally, I feel the fonts look a bit simple, there’s no variation in the fonts between the main text and the tagline, the main text and the tagline are far too close together, the colours are all wrong and I’m not a big fan of the shape/icon.

It’s a start, but your work needs to be considerably better before its accepted on Graphic River. Keep at it!

Thank you, I need to know what you think about this work?