What should be changed to improve it?

hi buddy take a look at what u have done and pls tell me what u can see … what i want to point at is that the eye gets lost in the process of reading as there are some texts spread everywhere very anarchically if u ask me … there are some flagged on the left some on the right , some fully justified, some not … hard to understand the logics in all this , do u understand? some texts are not positioned as expected as they are also too close from margins and this is thus not breathing or looking like it’s chocking …
yellow - orange texts are hardly readable , too due to the lack of contrast …

in addition u have a lot of alignment issues and some very strange choices of shape combinations … mixing squares and circles in such a context is bringing u into something that is not matching and that u could not manage to deal with indeed

the positioning of the logo is not the right one, pull it down a bit pls …

finally the typo is sort of clean but rather flat too and apart from the title springing out a little bit , there is almost no hierarchy of information in what u have here at this stage …

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