what is wrong?

Here is the comment from your Envato Quality team reviewer:
This item does not meet the general commercial quality standard required to be accepted on AudioJungle, unfortunately.

Can you explain more exactly what is wrong in the song?
thanks for your time

In my opinion the track is quite strange both from a composing point of view and from your choice of sounds. There are many bells that sound out of tune, and sort of sound not harmonic; overall quite all the sounds are not very high quality or modern.