what is the probleme with this logo please ?

Envato Authors Graphics Authors
,
1

hi guys , what is the problem with this logo please ?image

2

Hello!

First main problem… the name. Is it Lorem Ipsum(or is just for this forum presentation)? If yes, my suggestion is to find a suggestive title in order to have changes on being approved.

Regards

1 Like
3

hello!
yes , i will change the title to have changes on being approuved .
regards

4

thank you for help , appreciate

5

Not a massive fan of the font, I think Century Gothic has had its day. And for the ‘beast’, the body and the ‘up on its hind legs’ action makes it look like a horse… but the head looks like a ram. It’s mildly confusing. But yeah, a proper example name for the logo is always a good idea, rather than dummy text.

2 Likes
6

Also, there’s too much fiddly detail on the head - I had to look at it for a moment to figure out what it was supposed to be. With a logo you should look at it instantly and see the concept clearly. There doesn’t seem to be a clear concept anyway, I’m not clear on what usage buyers would have for the logo.

1 Like
7

Hello SpaceStockFootage,
You are completely right, after I see the confusion between a ram and horse, and I will put an example of title, I appreciate your help, thank you

8

strong text**
Yes, I will try to improve the visu and make it clearer, thanks

1 Like
9

Consider the typography, specially the font sizes of tag line and alignment, and also the overall alignment of the complete composite

1 Like
10

thank you for your help , appreciate !!! i will fix that