With respect no - I’m not a reviewer but personally I would say this is still way off the standards.
The points made above are not an exhaustive list - you need to know why you are making changes and reflect those throughout
If we see those superficially then inevitably there would be more if investing the time to check in detail.
The more rushed fixes are the more likely things will be missed and done too often will lead to an item being blocked
As things to look at (again not a precise list):
typography needs a lot of work esp the italic fonts look awful esp allover product pages and blog posts
using other authors thumbnails linking to other items as per the home page is cheeky
you need significantly more pages, post types, item layouts, and other premium features
several areas that could be improved on mobile
id almost suggest having a r2l and a l2r version
I’d suggest looking at popular themes and understand the attention to detail, versatility, etc.