What do you think of my animation

Hello all

I would like to hear from you what you think of my animation.
I like to keep it as simple as possible, but maybe that also makes it a bit boring?
I would like to make all kinds of animations with these figures.
I am open to criticism or recommendations before I send to the expert jury of Videohive :slight_smile:

Thanks in advance!

I think if your chracter has legs, they should be moving…

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Yes, I think you are right!
I’ll get to work on it right away, thank you.

The animation is super outdated. There is no color scheme (just a set of incompatible colors). The dirty gradient background is very dull. The camera stands still. All animation is too linear and simple. And of course, I don’t see any commercial potential in such a project, even if you fix all the mistakes.

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No of course not. I don’t want to get rich from it either, but is it still a possibility just for fun?
Sometimes it’s just nice to experiment a bit, I learn from that, without immediately delivering work from a commercial point of view :slight_smile:

But thanks anyway.

You are overreacting, I only send in an item once or twice a year.
I don’t want to harm anyone with that, and I’m convinced I won’t either.

Have a nice day.

I think you should work on color harmony

Thanks i am going to work on it.

Hi. I think you should work on character animation, make some camera moves, different shots, closer shots. You could improve lighting and work on textures and make the overall animation more fluid and not so “robotic”.
Hope this helps.
Good Luck!

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Ok thanks, I’ll work on that :slight_smile:

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