What do you think about this theme banner?


#1

Does it look good?


#2

Too bland - needs more info - don’t go over the top but something useful to fill the space and make it clearer as to what it is.

I would also move the monitors over to one side to free up space to add copy etc.

Monitors etc. look very ‘placed’ and quite unnatural on the pink BG


#3

Thank you for feedback. What do you think now?
banner2


#4

I changed it.
banner_1


#5

While I would concentrate more on the item than the preview image, with respect it still doesn’t look very premium.

  • the logo is not great

  • devices and text are not peoperly aligned

  • the phone/ipad are illegible

  • devices still feels very forced, placed and un-natural


#6

This’s hard to say why I feel bad with this banner. But I guess there is some problem that I need to list them down.
Background and the colors of other elements that looks don’t match each other.
The mockup, you need to re-order the position, adjust the shadows (make it more realistic).
Try to improve typography: https://webdesign.tutsplus.com/tutorials/search/Typography

Try to practice more.

Best,

Tam