Please share your ideas? Your ideas are very important for me 
It looks alright, but it’s highly unoriginal. I’ve seen logos almost identical to it many times before.
Thanks for advice, Can’t I upload to graphicriver? If i upload to graphicriver, will it be reject?
Yes, it will most likely be rejected.
Then I will design another logo and present it to you.
thank you good times
hi it will be hard rejected without a shadow of a doubt indeed …the thing is that basically , if i rather like the illustration part , this is a bit as @XioxGraphix mentioned not really revolutionary either … but more importantly u have several things that are really not ok …
1- contrast
“art” is hard to read … this is not popping out of the background and the problem is that this is particularly an important part … whether we consider the choice of color, the readability or the impact / hierarchy of information this is not ok …
2- homogeneity
u have no black color at all in the illustration but have some in the name , this looks strange …
3- missing tagline
u do not have any tagline, the problem is that this is required …
4- typo
the typo is very basic … not only is this not really original but in addition, this is not combining fonts either , in other words, as such , inly with this point u have no chance at all to have the item approved here , as here typo is the prevailing part …
5- proportion
sorry to say just this but the text part is very small compared with the illustration one and this is not working like this …
6- missing horizontal version
this is required , u need to have it and the logo category is the only one where missing files can lead to hard rejections …