… or somewhere in the middle, maybe - 
help from some fresh ears needed please 
It’s the first two tracks on my Soundcloud page:
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Hello here , the track is really good , the only thing is the fact that here the drums are too Intrusive !
very just a bit ! there needs percussion !
Thanks for the reply.
I’m just tweaking it now and adding some percussion.
Yet another version 
I must stop this, upload and move on!
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The track is very good , no doubt !!! but here you have a whole lot of drums , if you want to earn a lot then you need to do ( straight kick ) this makes the commercial sound ! and the drums are better in other songs to use ( for example rock or something ) . I repeat that this is a very cool track , it will approved !!! but will have very few sales ((( how sad it may sound )))
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Do you mean less volume?
or
less drums… too much going on?
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look , my advice , replace the drum part to straight kick 
Ok, fair enough, I’ll have a go and see how it sounds.
Thanks
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