twice a failure. what did i do wrong?

like mortal combat battle is starting!

nice, but I think this has many aspects of not being accepted:

-first of all the commercial use, its not wide
-maybe the title and keywords are totally wrong to make a client find this etc

nice song otherwise, the lead - melody is pretty repetitive

but all in all, this is a nice track but without so much commercial usage

so people would not find it easily.

ALSO, it ends so weird, and sudden, this is not acceptable anywhere

hope it helps. nice song, with nice feeling, but not commercially valuable if you get me after all I said