I did not understand the reason for this rejection, could anyone give me some opinion?
Does not Track have a good idea for Sale?
Good track! think dismissed due to the fact that a lot of repeats.
There is lack of variation. Rearrange it with a “B part” and it will work
As the tune appeared on my mind after listen to your track. I have a little idea about the chord progression.
You can make the first cycle: G B7/D#-Em - C - D and then G B7/D# - Em -C -Cm in time 4/4 and swing feel.
It sound good to me friend. Try this. Maybe a big sale. LOL