Track Rejected - Tips/Advice please! <3

Hi Everyone

I had my recent track rejected. an while saying that can be disheartening, I guess the positives are i’ve discovered the forums and can get more involved in the envato community!!! always a positive eh!

So i was hoping I could get some honest and brutal advice from fellow producers on why this track was rejected!!
[[https://soundcloud.com/ben-hesketh-music-62812940]]

I couldn’t find a way to upload directly so here is a Soundcloud link, I hope that is ok

Thanks in advance for any help

Ben

Hi
Something wrong with the link, can you fix it?

Hi Redberry does this link work… https://soundcloud.com/ben-hesketh-music-628129401/uplifting-piano-strings-extended/s-xNKJ7

hi! now link is ok) idea of the track is very good and positive, but in my opinion track needs to be more dynamic in rhythm section, i would add more percussions in drums and make transitions between parts of the track (for example, part 1 is ended with reverse crash and kick+crash, and than reversed piano chord is coming up to the part 2). and i think you need to make end of the track)

best regards!