Track Rejected Please Help !!!!!

Hello

This track was rejected. I would appreciate any feedback. Is it a dead duck or can I salvage it with some changes? Any feedback much appreciated. Is it too monotonous, is the mixing bad or do the instruments sound unnatural etc.

Thanks

Ben

Hello! Good base for the track! This “dead duck” just needs to be “stuffed” with sequences, percussion, all kinds of sounds and effects to taste. And it will be a wonderful decoration of the “festive table”!

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The melodic line is beautiful, I like it, maybe a little monotonous, but great.
I think instead that the mix sounds too “dark”, you should clear it up a little bit, and make it more bright.

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Thank you for your comment and time. Great ideas.

Thank you very much. I will do a brighter mix and one with more percussion and sound effects.