Track rejected, please feedback

Hi, my track has been rejected, I need your feedback please. Thank you.

Hello! :slight_smile:

It does not sound live.
Musical instruments lack life.

But your track is quite musical and it’s great :sweat_smile:

My advice, banal but, уou need to work more in the mix, and listen to more tracks of top authors in these categories. You need to practice mixing and mastering your music.
I wish you good luck!

Thank you for your feedback and your advice, I appreciate.