Track have been rejected, need help! This track have been rejected, what wrong with it? Can anybody help?

Definitely a good start!

  • Strings are too thin and not present enough.
  • Piano at 27 is way too muddy. It sounds like there’s some sort of bandpass on it. What are you using for your piano sample?
  • Overall, I think the mixing/mastering of it is what’s hurting the most.

1:30 sounds really nice! (except for the mixing of the piano). It really starts to come together there. The ending is way cool.

Thank you for your comment) I’m using the soundiron’s emotional piano. is that not good?)