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Hi Guys,

Can you please let me know your opinion on this track?

Thank you.

Great joke!
In fact, all parts sound great on their own! This is clearly not done by a beginner. I liked the open-strings guitar. And in general, the more I listen, the more I like it. There’s something about it!

Hi, more cowbell would not harm.

man, this is not ready. it has so many immature stuff, bad notes etc.
I think the composer really needs like a lot of months to become better.
needs practice to become better