Hi, this my second attempt to submit ppt template to graphicriver, and again it’s been rejected like the first one…can anyone give review and advice? if it a bad template, then how bad is it in your opinion?
hi i see a collection of different sort of problems indeed, the first one is that this is hard to identify what the item is for … i mean hard to get to know who is the template is addressed to and who is the “target”. That may look a pro but this is more likely , in such a saturated market. a thing to bury the item alive indeed and a guaranty that even if the thing had been accepted that it would have been hard to find unless u bring potential customers on your own …
second of all, it seems to me that the item is globally really way too monochord and definitely too flat and slightly a bit too dark. This is partly due to the uniform blue color in the background and the fact this is a basis almost never “broken” but repeated from one slide to the other indeed
I do not mean that u really break this basic design principle as this is not , though , to be honest the contrast between the background and texts on top of it is likely not to be good enough so to speak …u need to find ways give more relief to texts in a general way and in particular to the titles so that u create a stronger hierarchy in the process. Introducing more font variations, combinations and touches of originality in the typo would help to draw more attention on important texts and make secondary texts look like so …
a bit hard to understand why u shift the organization and flagging from center to left sometimes when it looks like that in most cases u could have kept everything on the left and have more homogeneity , but maybe this is ok for this type of template, i do not know …
i think that most of your “big issue are” about the thing that i mentioned first
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Hii, thanks alot for your feedback… i think everything you said are true, and i’m still trying to make improvement on my works, hope can be better next
u are welcome if u feel like that u have material enough to bring your game to the next level, pls click the “solution” box , good work and good luck 
Finally my work got accepted by Graphicriver, thanks to your advice, it’s really work…
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so very happy for u , well done good luck with sales then