The flyer was rejected - PLS, need some advice

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#1

Hi Everyone, I will be glad to have some feedback on that PSD Flyer.
Thanks


#2

Your title BBQ is invisible. The elements are not well integrated. The smoke looks fake. The light is confusing. Too many fonts used.


#3

Hi,
Thank you for Taking the Time to share your opinion.
I agree with most of what you say… i’ll do your trick :wink:


#4

I agree, maybe the BBQ text is not visible enough?
Maybe try another typeface for the tagline as well? :slightly_smiling_face:


#5

Thanks for the Tips,
I’ll try different materials until I’ve found the right ones… the same for other stuff :wink: