Hi Everybody. I hope everyone is safe and sound in this pandemic situation.
I made this spartan Logo. will you please point out my mistakes. Thanks in advance.
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What makes your logo more special than the other 148 existing Spartan logos? Also the eyes looks like something else, if you know what I mean.
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i guess the only thing is the upper part of the cloak but he did not really manage to handle well about imbricating …
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hi if u ask me this is too simple and as @DesignSomething mentioned rightfully so, this is more than deja vu feeing inspiring at this stage. Colors are, in addition, not contrasting enough in my view so that the non whote parts are springing out more. The division between the different elements of the helmet are are not clear and big enough, which tend to make the logo look like a “pathe” (massive volume where distinction are not super visible). Most importantly again, as such apart from not differing enough from others, i think that there is little commercial potential as regard to the fact that it doesn’t take people special skills to redo it rather easily and quickly. So why buying if u cannot save significant time anyways? the red part on top of the helmet also fails to be realistic enough if u ask me and the rest of your logo is not abstract enough so that this part u have made is either matching or being relevant with the rest. U also have a real spacing and imbrication problem at the moment …text and illustration seem disconnected geographically and i think that even style wise they could be better with a font inspiring spartans much more. It would also help u to have more relief out of introducing a tagline and playing so that u can have variations, font combos and touches of originality
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Yeah i wanted to make it simple but it has turned into something different😂. Thanks for replying.
Thanks a lot for your nice feedback. I am not much into logo designing and this was for practice purpose. I will definitely work more to make it perfect. Thus there are many spartan logos with great quality.
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u are welcome if u have enough clues of what to do with the item pls check the solution box, good work and good luck 