Sorry i am a noob, Please tell me why track rejected

Sorry i am a noob, Please tell me why track rejected

https://soundcloud.com/will-elfer/cartoon-boogie

Hi! Listen to your track, it sound a bit out of sync… some chords, even if your intention was an arpeggio, sounds too out of time. Another point, it´s not easy to identify the form… I always need to mind that, most of the time, non musicians will listen and buy it…

I hope I could help!