Some feedback , please

What do you think? It’s ok? I need to change something? I’ll be accepted? Thanks!

hi buddy, for me lines looks not regular and i think u should rework them to make them more appealing and professionally drawn . the card style is clean but is lacking a bit originality also in my view. Otherwise, i am not sure that they like the fact that u use photoshop presets for icons and that they turn out to consider the typo as worked out enough when they think much about it here … if u can embetter all this i think u can take your work to the next level :slight_smile: GL

Thanks!! About this one what di you think?

Yeah man - this is the one! Way to go!