Some feedback please....for this design!

Hello! I am new on themeforest and I recently upload a psd theme for spa/beauty salon.
Do I have any chance to have this item accepted? How can I improve this theme?
You can see the jpg file here:
Thank you in advance for feedback and suggestion.

Sorry but not as it is

  • The typography, spacing and hierarchy needs work

  • It lacks unique or stand out features and needs a lot more to it

  • A one page PSD is about as hard as it comes in terms of types and categories to get approved in

thanks a lot!