Soft Rejected Template


#1

Template: http://jesuskostov.tk/

  1. READABILITY: Parts of your design are either difficult to read or have contrast issues. Please make sure all sections of your design have adequate contrast and all text is easily readable on all devices.

  2. TYPOGRAPHIC HIERARCHY: The typographic hierarchy of this item requires additional work. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/understanding-typographic-hierarchy--webdesign-11636

  3. SPACING AND ALIGNMENT: There are spacing and alignment issues in this item. Please make sure that all elements are aligned properly and spacing is consistent from section to section. Here are some articles with more information regarding negative space and proper spacing: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/using-white-space-or-negative-space-in-your-designs--webdesign-3401, http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/adding-space-to-your-designs--webdesign-14836

  4. COLOR PALETTE: The chosen color palette requires additional work. For more information, see: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/an-introduction-to-color-theory-for-web-designers--webdesign-1437


#2

Hi there!

I just checked your template. Here is my review at this moment:

  • Readability. As the reviewer mentioned, there are part on your template either difficult to read or have contrast issues. Some examples below:

My suggestion is to make the heading (CREATIVE DESIGN) bigger and bolder. In the same time, make the paragraph font-size smaller. and lighter.

  • Same problem here:

  • Same problem here:

  • TYPOGRAPHIC HIERARCHY: All over the place, your headings are almost smaller than the paragraphs. Please fix this.

  • Make this smaller:

  • Logo doesn’t look like a logo(make it bolder)

  • The pricing tables values are out of place. Make these smaller. Seems to be too agressive

  • SPACING AND ALIGNMENT: Pay attention to button spacing. Space issues between headings and paragraphs

  • Increase space between elements

  • Alignment issues on pricing tables button:

  • COLOR PALETTE: For me the color palette is quite boring. Try to reduce the white space. There is a lot of white space all over this item which gives you a sad/boring feeling.

    • There are some box-shadow on hover over elements. Make it semi-transparent as it is too agressive and does not fit with the rest of the layout.
      ** Pay attention to some approved designs and take notices regarding: colors, spacing, typography, hierarchy, alignment etc.

Regards


#3

Thank you so much !!! :blush:


#4

And now?? http://jesuskostov.tk/