[Soft Rejected] SPACING and typographic hierarchy issues

themeforest

#1

HI guys,

My site get soft reject. but I don’t understand two comments envato mentioned:

  1. Many of the elements in the template are not aesthetically spaced.

  2. The typographic hierarchy of this item requires additional work

Can someone help me?

Site is: http://lanono.bitballoon.com/


#2

Are you familiar with the term hierarchy when referring to typography? It means the order of prominence of each piece of typography, so main title is most prominent, then sub title, etc. So in your experience section, to me each part of the text looks too similarly sized and coloured. It looks to me like MBA could possibly be larger than the details below it, or could stand out more in another way for example by using a different colour. Size, colour, weight etc are typically how you create a good hierarchy, so perhaps using 2 base colours for your text might work better than just 1 as you have now. Anyway it’s a pretty cool looking design, good luck.


#3

i get it
thanks a lot


#5

for SPACING ISSUES that some elements are not aesthetically spaced , any one can help which elements reviewer Means ?