Soft Rejected .. Could you help me ?


#1

Hi guys,

I Got soft rejection on my PSD template. Please, if you have any idea on how i can improve the template, give some clues. Thank you so much.

Here is message from the reviewer:

Thanks for your submission.

‘LoliApps - Landing page Theme’ isn’t quite ready for ThemeForest. But don’t fret, we’d love to see you resubmit after making the changes outlined by the reviewer below. When you’re ready, you can upload your changes here.

Comments from your Quality team

Thank you for your submission.

  1. COPYRIGHT VIOLATION: Please note that we do not review items for copyright or intellectual property issues, and this is your responsibility as you have confirmed during the upload process. However, we have some concerns that assets used in your item may not have been properly licensed. No famous people or screenshots from Movies, TV Series, Video games, CD covers or anything similar that might be infringing on any copyrights are acceptable. Please remove them from the preview image. Please review your item, identify any assets in it that are not licensed, and replace them with properly licensed assets. Please note that Envato takes copyright complaints and issues very seriously. Please be aware of your obligations under our membership terms to ensure that your items do not infringe anyone else’s intellectual property. - Marketplace Knowledge-base: http://support.envato.com/index.php?/Knowledgebase/List - Marketplace Content Policy: http://support.envato.com/index.php?/Knowledgebase/Article/View/284/ - Marketplace Asset Usage: http://support.envato.com/index.php?/Knowledgebase/Article/View/122 - Marketplace Copyright information: http://support.envato.com/index.php?/Knowledgebase/List/Index/60/

  2. TYPOGRAPHIC HIERARCHY: The typographic hierarchy of this item requires additional work. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/understanding-typographic-hierarchy--webdesign-11636

  3. VISUAL HIERARCHY: The visual hierarchy of this item requires additional work. Focus on better defining which areas of this item should demand more attention and creating a logical structure to the design. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/an-introduction-to-hierarchy-webdesign-14947

  4. SPACING AND ALIGNMENT: There are spacing and alignment issues in this item. Please make sure that all elements are aligned properly and spacing is consistent from section to section. Here are some articles with more information regarding negative space and proper spacing: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/using-white-space-or-negative-space-in-your-designs--webdesign-3401, http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/adding-space-to-your-designs--webdesign-14836

  5. COLOR PALETTE: The chosen color palette requires additional work. For more information, see: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/an-introduction-to-color-theory-for-web-designers--webdesign-1437

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#2

Hi,

The illustrations are very nice, and I really like it.

Several Clues:
The CTA Buttons on the cover (above fold) doesn’t fit, they demand more attention IMHO. Also, the footer needs more love, feels unfinished right now.

Other:
I couldn’t find any problems with spacing/alignment or colors. But maybe it’s copyright violation, but don’t have the right due dilligence to make any statements regarding that matter. At last, maybe you should check the usability for customers and marketability.

Hope this helps, Cheers!


#3

Thanks a lot :slight_smile: