It’s a good project but i think there a lot projects in this style here in videohive.
With a fast view, i think maybe you need to give a bit space at typography.
For example: 0:25 “NEW TEMPLATE” Give a bit space to the letters between “NEW TEMPLATE”, you know.
I try to understand how you can fix it, you can do anything you want of course.
Next, 0:38 the “Lorem ipsum…” too small font here and i think there is some bad quality in this font.
0:42 envato logo, give more space on animation… I think you can play with all envato logos to be more realistic… not to hard… easy fade, etc you know.
Same at 0:43 your animation it’s too hard.
So, i think if you want to make a different style, play more with the lines, i see same style with a lot projects like this in videohive. Fix a bit envato logo animations, use better quality at fonts you use, give some space to letters and try to upload again.
It’s my opinion… ; -) Good luck!