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#1

Thank you for your submission.

  1. SCROLLING ANIMATIONS: The scrolling animations are currently overused. Animation is a tool that should be used sparingly to help enforce the concept of your design. Please consider where you are using animations and their purpose.

  2. TYPOGRAPHIC HIERARCHY: The typographic hierarchy of this item requires additional work. For more information, please read: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/understanding-typographic-hierarchy--webdesign-11636

  3. SPACING AND ALIGNMENT: There are spacing and alignment issues in this item. Please make sure that all elements are aligned properly and spacing is consistent from section to section. Here are some articles with more information regarding negative space and proper spacing: http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/using-white-space-or-negative-space-in-your-designs--webdesign-3401,\ http://webdesign.tutsplus.com/articles/adding-space-to-your-designs--webdesign-14836

  4. FONT SIZE: Please increase the font size of the following text elements. A larger font size will enhance the item’s usability and readability for all types of users. Here are minimum and recommended font sizes for desktop viewports:

Body: 13px minimum / 16px+ recommended
Menus: 11px minimum / 14px+ recommended
Excerpts: 11px minimum / 14px+ recommended
Breadcrumbs: 10px minimum
Meta Elements: 10px minimum

Ref: https://blog.attackthefront.io/your-body-text-is-too-small-5e02d36dc902#.35y3amw5l


#2

Hey,

Will try to give you some advice based on what you posted.

  1. Reduce scrolling animations by 90% and keep them only for elements that should drag the user’s attention (CTA etc…)

  2. Rework your typography hierarchy. The font is not good, nore is the logo, change them. Create a complete hierarchy from h1 to h4 at least, without forgetting to include paragraphs. Choose appropriate font sizes and weights.

  3. Install a ruler extension in your browser and check every single element spacing and alignment in your template. Remember that TF reviewers like even paddings and margins whenever possible. If you are using absolute and fixed position, make sure they fulfill a particular purpose for being placed in such way.

  4. Apply the font sizes changes asked by the reviewer.

  5. (My advice) I don’t like font awesome, it looks outdated. Use a more modern font icons set (line icons ) and pay More attention to details. Finally, wait a while (1-2 weeks) Before resubmitting so the reviewer will accept that you took the appropriate time to make the required changes.

I hope it helps ! Regards and good luck !


#3

I think the comments from reviewer are very clear. You just need to follow those advices one by one and everything will be alright.

Don’t panic. There will be more. Just keep calm and going.

Best regards!


#4

thanks bro


#5

thanks for your advices