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This the key of this type of rejection, take care it may be hard next time.
Check the given references and make the improvement accordingly.
good luck!

  1. Illustrations are too close to the content in some areas.
  2. Spacing problems – try to distinguish sections more obviously.
  3. Typography hierarchy can be a bit better in some places.
  4. http://jahangirseven.com/niroon/portfolio/graphic-design/ Pages like that one look too blank and unfinished.
  5. I don’t like the scrolling animations you used at all.
  6. The main reason, in my opinion – lack of uniqueness. There are tons of “dribbble-style” designs already present on the market. You need to provide more originality and artistry of your product in this niche to get approved.