Rejection Trailer Music, searching for feedback

Hi, this is one of my first attempts to write trailer music. This track is written for the horror/thriller/action genre. Since i have been rejected multiple times i want to ask you if you can give me some tipps and tricks to improve my tracks

It needs something more commercial-general use theme, and more minimal, here are going on so much!

Alright, thanks for the advice. I find it really hard to decide which elements are suitable and which are not

This is good but very specific how you did it, I mean its like made for a specific scene of a scecific movie, the intro and outro is not very commercial use. You could do it more commercial and recognizable kind of starting with the main riff, and ending right away kind of!

Also mix has problems, too much bass in the hits, and lots of 100-250 Hz in violins and some sounds, also they seem too dry, put some nice effects like reverb delay and so on.

Thank you for your time and feedback. That was really helpfull! I will change those things.