rejection issue

hi well I guess that almost all the things that I mentioned with your last visual apply here … they are globally softened problems so to speak but all the mistakes are more or less here again … u have alignment issues on the right hand side. There are spacing issues with the text on the top right corner. There are some big time contrast issues with the choice of colors not being the right ones so that the information are springing out , easy to read and also given the right impact, exposure and readability that they should have … there is material to improve the flyer with the positioning of the logo , too close from the grey stripe. The name of the speaker looks really secondary so why having the picture of the guy? The phone number in branding terms should be an incentive to call so why this is so dull and lost in the bottom left corner (not being placed according to impact zones determined by the “z-shape reading process”). The picture of the guy looks pasted out there rather than composed. The logo is not given the right exposure as they is hardly springing out of the background. Basically enough in terms of global style, typo and so on there is nothing special out here and why accepting this file that is not perfect while u have thousands of lookalike things in the catalogue of items for sale already and that turn it to be much consistent all the way ? also, sorry to say just this, but the commercial potential of the item is far from being huge as there os not much graphic design here and and this probably would not push people into believing that they would save time or offer a flyer going beyond their personal skills to buy the item …