It’s a miracle, but someone gave me a feedback in hard rejected item, so please, if you have any ideas what does they exactly mean - tell me,
here is it:
Nice ideas here, but there are some passages that do not sound as well executed and/or arranged as they should, for a professional commercial application setting. For this reason we won’t be able to approve this submission.
P.S. thanks to that guy, who gave me a feedback:)