Rejected - what you think

2 days for review, that’s ok :slight_smile:

but rejected

Thanks

The smoke simulation render has a bit of a flicker, and there’s this dark edge around the smoke, which makes it seem like a key-ed out stock footage smoke (i know there’s no way around this, other than setting the whole smoke layer to screen or add blending mode).

Overall though it lacks complexity, it needs a little extra to grab the viewer’s attention. I would’ve gone with a vortex like simulation that starts really zoomed in and it zooms out as it reveals the logo. And somehow add some highlights in the smoke, maybe blend more smoke simulations together for more interesting looks. Good luck man

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