Rejected track. Why?!

Hey guys! Please tell me where is the problem with this track? My item has been rejected -

https://soundcloud.com/user-560349207/scary-escape-1

(Thank you for your submission. We have completed our review of “Scary Escape” and unfortunately we found it isn’t at the quality standard required to move forward, and you won’t be able to re-submit this item again.)

Thank you…

Perhaps the problem is that the track is difficult to use commercially. The music begins too abruptly. If in the beginning there was only a piano without a “horror”-impact, it would be different.Maybe this is an author’s idea, but violins from 0:16 sound not quite naturalistic. The part that begins with 0:16, I was inspired by the idea that it could be an somber dubstep or hip-hop track (of course, if you correctly add the right rhythm). After the part, starting at 0:48, I could no longer get rid of the thought that it was clearly inspired by all the famous film with Jared Leto) There are many different genres on AJ, but each of them (even the most dark) should be maximally suitable for commercial use.

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the first noise at least!!!

Thank you! :slight_smile: