Hi everyone! This Track was rejected…What should I change to improve it?
Many instruments play lead parts in the same range at the same time. The result is a cacophony. The organ plays very loudly. The solo part in the middle is tiresome with both timbre and a strange melody. There are also some downsides to mixing, but in my opinion, this is the main thing. In general, the arrangement needs to be changed.
Reason for reject is non-commercial sound. The sound of the instruments is dull, mudd. Check the frequencies of 200-700 Hz for resonances, in the bass you need to lower frequencies in the region of 300-500 Hz, it give muddiness throughout the track. Sorry for my English.