Rejected track - looking for advices

Hi everyone! This Track was rejected…What should I change to improve it?

https://soundcloud.com/piero-casale-475715366/upbeat-funk/s-L7rjAXzeua0

Many instruments play lead parts in the same range at the same time. The result is a cacophony. The organ plays very loudly. The solo part in the middle is tiresome with both timbre and a strange melody. There are also some downsides to mixing, but in my opinion, this is the main thing. In general, the arrangement needs to be changed.

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Thank you!

Hello!
Reason for reject is non-commercial sound. The sound of the instruments is dull, mudd. Check the frequencies of 200-700 Hz for resonances, in the bass you need to lower frequencies in the region of 300-500 Hz, it give muddiness throughout the track. Sorry for my English.
Good luck!