Guys would you lend me your ears to help me understand why exactly was this rejected?
Thank you very much for your time :).
Things that popped into my head on first listen:
Uke sounds very static and stiff - couldn’t tell if this is what you were going for with the hard cutoffs but i think it lacks groove.
The bass is very overbearing when it kicks in… too much IMO.
The double kick before beat 3 is distracting and doesn’t work IMO, feels very stiff and doesn’t groove.
orbiterred,
thank you very much for your feedback and time friend,
i would agree with you,
awesome 
In my opinion look at this.
1.Double kick
2.Bass sound
3.1:11 fx
4.1:21 organ-choir sound.
