Hi, I would like to ask for your opinion and advice on the rejected song below. I know I still have a lot to learn, and I ask for the opinion and guidance of more experienced authors. Thank you very much in advance!
I´m in the street with mobile, so i can´t be more accurate.
- I think the main problem is in the mix.
- And the track is too long, nothing really happen, the main melody seems as a jam session.
- The end is too abrupt.
IOH, the arpeggio remembers me to “Every breaking waves” from U2.
Thank you very much for your opinion and you’re right about the melody, it was improvisational. I think a better defined main motif is needed.
Bad piano playing and weak composition.
Thank you for your feedback!