Rejected track/ Help with feedback/ What to improve

i got rejected track cause it does not meet the general commercial quality standard required (as they said)
Can you please give some feedback
is it not clear, or bad mixing/ mastering, or arrangement or something else?

All the parts are there for this to work well but in my opinion its your guitar tone. You’re coming at it from a hard-rock metal angle when really most background rock music is “indie-rock” a bit warmer and looser.

Here’s a piece of mine as an example.

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Thank you! It helps. becomes more clear for me.