Rejected track, advice appreciated.

Hi everyone, my future bass track was rejected. It’s my first time trying in this genre so any advice would be really appreciated.

well, I’m not familiar with this style but I’m going to give my opinion. I think it’s a very cool track, maybe a little bit experimental with leads… and from 1:32 you are using a very experimental way to do the end.
Maybe we can get more opinions here… hope this helps !
good luck! :slight_smile:

Hi @LewisWrightMusic! I know where is the issue. Your leed melody needs to be more straight and onbeat. Also, structure fo your track is too complicated and twisted. You need to listen to more future bass music. Analise structures and sounds of Audiojungle bestsellers in this category. Good luck!