Hello, someone help me i cant understand really why rejected a lot send work.
I want help me for just one accept later self learn.
Hi. If this item was rejected it´s understandable. In my humble opinion, if you´re going to make 3D animated models, like the tunnel in your item, is too basic using just simple primitives models like cube boxes, spheres and a couple of color lines. There are no details that can be eyecatching for customers that are used to see high quality 3D nowadays. I think this is the main reason, plus, even being a looped animation I guess it should be longer, yours is just 8 seconds, maybe something between 20-30 secs or more would be better.
Good Luck!
So thanks.
Take a look at this example of 3D tunnel, very detailed and high quality, so you can have a reference:
It´s not a looped background, it´s a template, but is good to see 3D quality used these days.
Hope it helps!
Wow this very diffrent working, my computer not good i next time stil try…
Yeah, you have to make it a bit complicated. I don’t like that blue lines - it looks a bit boring, no reflection, no luminance glow just a solid blue color.
Hi,
Unfortunately, it really looks simple and “cardboard” and will not be able to compete with more thoughtful versions. You will have to try harder.
Thank you and have a nice day!
Small detailes can be added to material surface using displacement maps if you work in 3d software.