Rejected new loop video

Hello, someone help me i cant understand really why rejected a lot send work.
I want help me for just one accept later self learn.

Hi. If this item was rejected it´s understandable. In my humble opinion, if you´re going to make 3D animated models, like the tunnel in your item, is too basic using just simple primitives models like cube boxes, spheres and a couple of color lines. There are no details that can be eyecatching for customers that are used to see high quality 3D nowadays. I think this is the main reason, plus, even being a looped animation I guess it should be longer, yours is just 8 seconds, maybe something between 20-30 secs or more would be better.
Good Luck! :+1:

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So thanks.

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Take a look at this example of 3D tunnel, very detailed and high quality, so you can have a reference:


It´s not a looped background, it´s a template, but is good to see 3D quality used these days.
Hope it helps!

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Wow this very diffrent working, my computer not good i next time stil try…

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Yeah, you have to make it a bit complicated. I don’t like that blue lines - it looks a bit boring, no reflection, no luminance glow just a solid blue color. :slight_smile:

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Hi,
Unfortunately, it really looks simple and “cardboard” and will not be able to compete with more thoughtful versions. You will have to try harder.

Thank you and have a nice day!

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Small detailes can be added to material surface using displacement maps if you work in 3d software.

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