Rejected Logo. What did I not think about?

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Good afternoon,
with respect, but this is far from market standards. Try analyzing the latest approved works on GR so that your design is accepted.

Thank you and have a nice day!

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hi u have many issues to deal with …
1- is the global style which look a bit too “clipartish” and too detailed for marketplace logos …
2- color combinations that seem not to match with each other and do not match with activity code, complementary colors and so on …
3- typo too flat globally and rather lacking of originality , variations and combinations indeed
4- imbrication, the positioning of the the text as regard to the illustration is not exactly the right one
5- tagline is not exactly in the right proportion

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Hello, @hellhat!
Thank you for the responding!

I agree that the logo is far from the market standards. But my problem is that sometimes I want to experiment or create something different… :thinking:

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It’s amazing that you have a predisposition for this, it’s really something that every designer should have. But you can’t create something or experiment on something if you haven’t fully mastered modern design. It’s like a train, you jump to the end of the last car and gradually get closer to the steering cabin, where you can experiment with button combinations and create your own trends.

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Okay, I’ll try to get to the steering cabin :wink:
Thanks!

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Hello, @n2n44 !

Thank you very much for all your detailed comments!

I tried to make these changes to the logo. What do you think about it? This is better or :joy: …?

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hi u are welcome lol :slight_smile: well i think that this is globally slightly better as less detailed and thus a bit more punchy though relief on the washing machine part was good and is missing now . with the new one, the colors are not connected between the illustration and text which is making the logo look not as homogenous as it should be, and i believe that the text part should be a bit bigger so that there this is mot proportioned with the illustration part

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Thanks again :slightly_smiling_face: . I will take note of your comments.

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good luck and good work, if u have clues enough about what to do , pls click the “solution” box :slight_smile: