What do you think about this?
The intro guitar sounds somewhat synthetic, I’d definitely look into choosing another library, recording a live guitar or using a warm synth instead of the guitar.
There’s a dissonant chord at 1:09, too. Also, try making that preset a bit less metallic and more generic sine/trianglular synth sounding.
It’s mostly the choice of instruments that got you rejected, I feel like it can definitely be improved to the point of approval.
Thanks. This a very constructive.