Rejected Item Feedback Request

Hi all,

Just looking for some feedback on this rejected track. Too much reverb? Bad mix? Any feedback is much appreciated.



I love the idea! wow a big reverb here… not sure curators like this fat reverbered sound! I think the staccatos are playing a rhythm that you are expecting some evolution.,. but you broke this evolution in 0:55… this change is a little bit abrupt IMHO
the melodic line is a little bit confusing, too much instruments fighting here. Also I don’t like much the drums… maybe it’s the sound.
just some of my ideas trying to help.
good luck!

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Thank you for taking the time to listen and for the feedback!

Thank you!

You might be right. I did try to bring them back in the next section, but perhaps the way they disappear is a bit too much of a dropout.

It came out a little more dense than I had intended. If I were better at mixing it might have been less of a problem. I’m improving with each track in that department, so things will hopefully get better!

Thank you again for taking the time to listen and for the feedback! Much appreciated.