Rejected - I'm not sure why, are you?

Envato Authors AudioJungle
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Hi all, yet another rejected track. Please let me know if you can suggested whats up with this track?..

Thanks

2

Wrong notes and scream.

3

Thanks for the feedback. Could you elaborate a little please if you don’t mind?
Im not sure which notes are wrong and I guess you mean the ‘heys’ are also no good?

4

Check out the fourth chord. There is a dissonance. And yes, “hey” doesn’t work.

5

Thanks again for the feedback, I’ll go back to the daw and check that 4th chord.
Do Audiojungle allow composers to resubmit adjusted tracks?

6

Can be resubmitted provided the track has been radically reworked. I recommend that you show the track to the community before submitting. To make sure everything’s okay. And don’t rush with this track. Set aside for a while. Later you will listen and hear what else you can fix, add, improve.
Good luck!

7

That piano is playing a G chord, but you are right, it doesnt sound right somehow. It’s tough!