Hi, what do you think about this hip hop track https://soundcloud.com/user-623519037/hip-hop/s-rLPk0
I need some advice on how I could improve
IĀ“m in the streets with earphones so i cant be more specific, i think there is a sample out of tempo.
The piano seems to be out of sync like @Manriquedelara said. Itās also a bit too repetitive and there is al lack of lower frequencies in my oppinion.
I agree with what has been said.
Listening with headphones I have a strange āphasingā feeling, something wierd with the stereo in the medium / low frequencies, but it might be me.
But yes, the lack of bass is a real problem to me. Or if you donāt use a powerful bass, then use a bass heavy kick.
Thank you all very much, @Manriquedelara @FOXYAudio @frozenjazz! I donāt know about the pianoā¦ maybe itās the guitar? I donāt really hear it and i quantized most of the audio and midi.
The missing lows jumped out on me, listening on my monitors again.
Thank you!
I agree the bass line is weak. It has some nice elements though. Some nice jazzy parts that work well. I like some of the piano runs and thereās good variation and changes in instrumentation. The timing is perhaps a little on the ālaid backā side, but I donāt mind it.
The main issue with this for me is that thereās only one chord progression throughout the entire track. It doesnāt lead anywhere and after 50s Iām waiting for a hook that never comes.
Thank you very much!
Iāll keep that in mind the next time I write a track like that and Iāll analyze some of the top sellers, considering your ideas!
I love people are so helpful and nice here on the forums!