Rejected flyer template

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#1

Hi,

My template has been rejected and I don’t know why. Can anyone help me? Preview here:

Thanks!


#2

This looks close to being approved. My suggestion is to do some more work on the typography. The colours kinda don’t look very fresh, they’re a bit dark and murky on the main titles. The large EASTER title looks a bit messy the way it’s been styled. I would suggest adjusting the colours on the text and making the main titles stand out a bit more, for example making the shadow / extrude parts a bit lighter. The layout of the “Sunday 16th April” bit could probably be a bit better too. I would expect this to be approved with some slightly improved typography.


#3

Thank you for your help! I’ll take your advice! :slight_smile: