Rejected Flyer, i need your advice

Dear Sir, could you please give your advices on these flyers why are there rejected.

Thank you for your valuable advices.

With respect this is a long way of for such a competitive category

  • Typography needs rethinking esp. font choices, hierarchy etc.

  • You cannot share the stock elements in the download which leaves very little once those are taken out

Thank you very much for your advice, I will try.